五年级英语作文及点评:My English Teacher

  My English Teacher Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall…

  My English Teacher

Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin.She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats verymuch. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We oftenplay games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.

要点评价】

这篇作文的题目是“我的英语教师”,是一篇详细介绍人物的作文。小创作者直截了当,立即扣题,最先详细介绍了音乐老师的名字,随后逐一详细介绍了她的外貌特征、爱好、外语水平、授课特性及其老师学生感情等。

孩子们在写一篇作文时,要留意应用自身 了解的词[组],以防写成一些错语句。创作时要留意含意连贯性、句子通畅、标点符号恰当、撰写清楚、标准等。

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